November 1st, 2009
|rsgamesmods||12:17 pm - Final Day – Fic: Team AU: Whether True or Fabricated, Whether Planned or Happenstance|
Title: Whether True or Fabricated, Whether Planned or Happenstance
Word Count: approx. 1740
Summary: Ordinary people AU. Sirius and Remus meet at an art museum.
Prompt: Turquoise – magic/art
Whether True or Fabricated, Whether Planned or Happenstance
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Was it truly AU or Canon Compliant? Please use the following: 2 for "yes", 1 for "sort-of", and 0 for "no"
How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
|Date:||November 1st, 2009 07:19 pm (UTC)|| |
Lovely, hehe. I guessed at the catch before we got there, as it was all too... comfortable and easy, but I was happy to get there anyway!
At first I couldn't decide if Sirius was a "paid escort" or if it was role play but it was great fun and sexy! Gives one ideas.........
OH, BOYS. SO RIDICULOUS. I LOVE HOW RIDICULOUS YOU MADE THEM. Because they're still in character but so. effing. ridiculous.
This is really cute and I was laughing and this still amuses me to no end:
And for the record, the Sirius from the gallery is clean, ok?
oh that made me laugh and i really needed to be happy today. what a clever story!
I grinned through this whole thing. Sirius's lines were so laughably terrible, LOL. And I snickered when he decided that his museum had him off his game.
My dear AU Team mate, I simply adored this. I realized what was going on before it actually happened, but that in no way diminished my pleasure in reading this story.
Will we have the gentleman and his slave later on, perhaps?
I could totally relate to Sirius in the beginning of this. I started out as an art history major and I really hate galleries because that very same reason of being OBSERVED while you're observing. Then that section with Expressionism vs. Impressionism came along and I snorted my tea.
I, however, was pleasantly taken by surprise with the twist. At first I thought this was going to be the traditional AU, meet cute sort-of thing, but it really turned out better.
This was awesome! :D I can honestly say I wasn't expecting that particular ending, though now I can see the hints scattered throughout. I had thought they were going waaay fast but then it turned out they weren't. *snickers* I love it! :D
That was very funny! I loved the banter and the cheesy pick up lines. I love that they are role playing... yay for my latest kink... and this was just marvellous! :) Great job.
ROFL!!!! I was a bit OMG that's fast, but hey it's really HOT so I can deal.... then then twist! (you so had me going //facepalms//)and I just burst out laughing! EXCELLENT!!
That was really cute! I liked it a lot. Very characteristic.
Definitely loved this. I had trouble not giggling out loud in the middle of the library when I read the last bit about the loincloth. And Sirius' silliness was just adorable, and light-hearted, and awesome. =3
|Date:||November 5th, 2009 05:03 am (UTC)|| |
This is funny, and awesome, and so *them*, and just through dialogue alone - seriously (all puns intended), color (ditto) me super impressed.
I grinned like a mad woman throughout, and oh Sirius, clever boy with that expressionism-impressionism bit - Art's a bit like Literature, isn't it? Say something confidently enough and loudly enough, and people will believe you. Haha.
lmao, I also noticed the twist, but it's not the twist so much as how well you revealed it that was amazing. The end banter was priceless. haha, the accusation of giving art-museum Remus syphilis. Of course, I was thinking of Aida the whole time, with the title and the museum. And they were wearing all white in my head. Damn my obsession with musicals!
I loved this, it was very funny and sweet and boyish. I honestly went all DDD: REMUS YOU DON'T SLEEP WITH A MAN THE FIRST TIME YOU MEET HIM and then the twist just made me laugh and grin like a madthing.
This is all sorts of sweet and wittiness. I loved your characterization of Remus and Sirius. They were so well matched and so very much themselves.