October 29th, 2009
|rsgamesmods||01:14 pm - Day 29 - Fic: Team AU: A Dusk; A Dawn|
Team: Team AU
Title: A Dusk; A Dawn
Warnings: fluff, some very poor parenting
Word Count: 2500
Summary: Sirius Black never received a Hogwarts letter – in fact, he never received any letter at all. His parents, unable to face the reality of having a squib for a son, abandon Sirius to the care of his uncle, Alphard.
A Dusk; A Dawn
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Was it truly AU or Canon Compliant? Please use the following: 2 for "yes", 1 for "sort-of", and 0 for "no"
How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
oh this was really wonderful, very different. I was so disappointed when it ended, I was just imaging further possibilities when i scrolled down and realized it was finished :( I think that you could go further with this, it was well written and perfectly awkward. great portrayal of all the characters.
Oh, I was really hoping that there would be more! I was so engrossed in your world!
Oh, this is very sweet! ♥
please, please write a sequel when we can know who you really are. i was quite taken with squib!sirius and i want to know more about remus now. who is he? is he a wizard? a werewolf? does he go to hogwarts? is sirius really a squib? it's all so tantalizing!
This was really adorable! I wish we could have seen more of their interaction, but it was a cute glimpse into an AU. :)
This was gorgeous! The imagery was beautiful, the lead up to Sirius asking Remus out was so sweet and innocent, and the actual moment was awkwardly adorable. Love this!
I really enjoyed both your concept and the lovely execution of this idea! &hearts I wish you could know how rare it is for me to wish a story was longer but that is the one thing that I wish for here! I'd love to see you either expand or continue this universe as I would like to know more of Uncle Alphard, the wise tea shoppe owner, Sirius, the squib, and Remus, the mysterious friend.
Oh, that was lovely! Your writing is very visual, very picturesque - I felt like I could visualize everything so clearly. Great idea making Sirius a squib, too ... would love to see this continued!
Very late to this party but I was in the mood for some Remus/Sirius :)
This was such a lovely read. It's been a while since I've read some AU!Remus/Sirius and this was a beautiful one. I love the quiet feel of the story. And the opening. Heartwrenching.