October 27th, 2009
|rsgamesmods||09:56 pm - Day 27 - Fic - Team AU - Fools Rush In|
Title: Fools Rush In
Warnings: Language, sexual references and crack à la ritardando
Genre(s): Humour/Crack, Angst/Drama
Word Count: 9 859
Summary: An inconspicuous lead guitarist in an obscure band, and a classic lit-geek in leather jacket that won't stop pursuing him. No restraining orders are filed and first impressions might turn out to be misleading.
Prompt: Orange: Healing/Understanding
Fools Rush In
Was it truly AU or Canon Compliant? Please use the following: 2 for "yes", 1 for "sort-of", and 0 for "no"
How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
|Date:||October 28th, 2009 02:33 am (UTC)|| |
Everything about this was brilliant; I love this story. I just fucking love it.
what a great story. i love how you didn't know it was magic au until all of a sudden it was. that was brilliant. brilliant. everyone was so in character, too. and i loved this: "Indeed, it is I again." Sirius showed off a smile that would make girls (had any been present) drop their knickers. Remus did not, for he owned none. because it kinda summed-up the entire fic.
Wonderful story, great narrative voice. I loved Sirius' impish persistence. Nicely done.
Oh, nice, really nice. The dramatic turn of events was brilliant. Well done.
So I wanted to quote my favorite bits here, but then there were too many :) So let me just say that this was so wonderful, incredibly funny at first, then so tense and serious and sweet. I'm bookmarking this to read again later, and hopefully you have written more stories, because I'm going to come and stalk you after the reveals are made :) Sadly, without the cigarettes.
|Date:||October 28th, 2009 12:07 pm (UTC)|| |
Omg so awesome <3 One of the best R/S fics I've ever read, seriously :)
|Date:||October 28th, 2009 03:56 pm (UTC)|| |
Oh, this is just clever, and so awesome. Love the magic-twist in a seemingly non-magic AU, and since I am not quite a music purist, I suspect much of the cleverness of this AU is lost on me - the awkward literary fumblings, though, I can completely relate, haha.
I wish I had the time to leave you a longer feedback, but school is evil, and I've only just sneaked enough time to read one fic (in like 2 weeks), so please just tell my incoherent offering on how good this fic is.
Thank you for sharing!
|Date:||October 28th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC)|| |
okay, basically ditto on all the comments above. this is beyond wonderful and hilarious. sirius is just hilarious and stupid and i love remus' logic all the way through. and you ended it on such a perfect moment... i've spent all afternoon imagining how the scene immediately afterwards goes.
hurray! great great great fic.
i think this might be my absolute favourite out of all the rs games fics i've read. i just love it, so much. i love that i'd no idea it was a magic au until it came up, that sirius was absolutely sirius, so in character, as was remus, in all the ways that count and more. i love that it's funny, and that it's sad, too, and i love that it's very realistic, very beautifully written. brilliant!
I love this so much!! I love how it seemed so non-magical and then it wasn't, and how their relationship unfolded and grew. Sirius's reaction to discovering Remus's lycanthropy was very realistic. I felt so bad for Remus! I'm so glad things worked out for them.
I really loved this. Sirius makes an absolutely charming stalker, and you write gorgeous, subtle dialogue. I especially liked the little exchange where Sirius asks if Remus is ever going to say yes, and Remus says no. ♥
Lovely, lovely fic.
I love how original, and in character this is. I was so sure they were both muggles, and then you twisted the story. I also found Sirius's reaction so refreshing. You really did a great job with this.
I'd love to read more from this universe... ::hint, hint::
Funny and just precious!!!! I love how things just twist on you think yo know!
You totally won me over with the Maurice reference!!!!
that was so funny and wonderful and i am positively still grinning :)
That was fantastic! I loved the progression of their relationship and Remus' gradual wearing down. I loved the slow reveals of their magic and Remus' lycanthropy, and the ending was wonderfully hopeful! The writing was lively and funny and clever. Wish I could vote!
This was absolutely brilliant and a joy to read. Surprising and intriguing all the way through, and an unflinching look at Sirius and prejudice and reason in general.
Oh, wow. Surprise!magic and music and literature and general feel of it... I LOVE THIS.
oh my word, this was actually divine, one of the best fanfics I have read in a long, long long time.
The chesmistry of the characters, the development of the story, the amazing plot twists, and the overall mood and humor were just brilliant. When I saw it was you who wrote this, I slapped myself for not having read it earlier.
I want to marry this story. I am absolutely serious.
I liked this very much. I really loved how you slowly started to incorporate canon into fic and the end was just perfect!!
happy!stalker Sirius was awesome and Remus just letting it happen was even better because they were clearly meant to have some sort of relationship.
|Date:||March 13th, 2010 01:45 pm (UTC)|| |
Oh wow. I think this is one of the most well-written fics I've ever read. Not to mention, sweet, adorable and so very beautiful.
I loved your Sirius. [Remus too, obviously, but your Sirius was dead-on what I like to imagine him, and just - this combination of lost and hopeful and arrogant and thoughtful - oh wow.]
Thank you for this. :)
This was really really excellent. I haven't read an R/S fic this good in too long of a time. Thank you thank you! Amazing job, amazing writing!
A wonderful story. I loved how Sirius chased Remus, and the end was so hopeful. Great story.