October 24th, 2009
|rsgamesmods||02:58 pm - Day 24 – Fic: Team Canon: Blue|
Warnings: Some blood and broken bones.
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Angst
Word Count: 2,261
Summary: Three moments during Sirius and Remus’s seventh year Christmas holiday with Joni Mitchell’s Blue as their soundtrack.
Prompt: Indigo, Word Prompt
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Was it truly AU or Canon Compliant? Please use the following: 2 for "yes", 1 for "sort-of", and 0 for "no"
How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
Mmmm, this was a lovely fic. I liked the quiet mood of it.
I could swear this was written just for me. It's lovely and perfectly pared down to the essentials. Very well written.
The pacing is what's so brilliant. I can hear every conversation just roll along and flow as if it wasn't rehearsed or written. Just a coulpe of people talking through things, doing what they do.
And I loved the detail in the scene in the shack. It was just enough to give up what we needed to know, and not too much that we get bogged down in the words. - Just like Joni Mitchell's music.
Carey, get out your cane, and I'll put on my finest silver. Go down to the Mermaid Café, have fun tonight..."
I am not always the biggest fan of songfictions, but this is great. You used the song well and naturally AND it was era appropriate. You actually made me like songfictions! There was such a calm, sweet, Christmassy mood to this, too.
oh, this was very pretty and i was quite taken with your use of visuals and song lyrics. i've not heard much joni mitchell, but i do love that song!
and that last line was perfect!
I really like the way you show the give and take of their relationship. Ups and downs while the writing is spare and much is left up to the reader to supply.
Amazing, actually absolutely beautiful and so cute and heartfelt.