October 22nd, 2009
|rsgamesmods||01:54 pm - Day 22 - Fic: Team Canon: Where there's a will|
Title: Where there's a will
Word Count: 1,735
Summary: Sirius doesn’t like Remus’ place, mostly because it isn’t Sirius’ place.
Where there's a will
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Aww, this was absolutely adorable. :-)
Oooh, I loved this! So cute and funny without excessive fluff :) I can just see Sirius biting his nails, thinking of the fate of his motorbike. And way to be sneaky on the whole relationship thing. Remus was awesome, too, so stubborn and independent. Hehe, I'm very happy now :)
Thank you so much! Yes, Remus can certainly be stubborn. But how else to combat Sirius and his ridiculous notions?
This was so precious, I love your characterizations and all of Remus's werewolf jokes at the end. It was all so them.
ahaha, the werewolf jokes were meant to be absurd. I hope they were. I'm so glad you liked it!!!
It was 1:34 am when Remus was back out the door, moving to the nearest apparition point. This meant war.
“Remus Lupin, give it back!”
“Give what back?”
It was the next morning, and Remus was lounging on his bare wood floors, leaning against the wall. He’d bought a book to pass the time, but he was only 40 pages in by the time Sirius had come storming in. Impressive, in a bit of an obsessive way. Sirius couldn’t have been awake more than an hour.
“My bike! My beautiful bike is gone! And you took it!”
“Did I?” He took a biscuit and dipped it into his tea, before taking a bite and continuing his reading.
This fic just fills me with unholy glee and I hope I'm still grinning like a maniac hours from now......
I'm grinning like a maniac from all the comments I got, actually... I am proud to provide unholy glee! Thank you for enjoying! ^^
I love this! So cute and funny while keeping them both so in character. I think I grinned the entire time I was reading. :D
I'm glad I got you grinning. I got to grinning ridiculously looking at all the comments. ^^
darling banter and a very cute story. the stolen motorcycle was a nice touch. this was very canon, too.
This was wonderful. I felt like your characterization was spot-on, and I love that you had Remus retaliate against Sirius. Lovely :)
Well, Remus' other options were to a) buy new furniture or b) do what Sirius wanted; really, neither option was viable. (And you know he considered all options, even quickly.) His hand was forced. :-)
This was very, very sweet. I enjoyed it quite a bit. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you! I aim to please. I hadn't expected it to get as sweet as it did... but there it went!
|Date:||October 23rd, 2009 04:25 am (UTC)|| |
Hee, this is adorable! I can totally see Sirius being crazy enough to steal all that stuff and Remus being stubborn enough to wait for its return while holding the bike hostage. Excellent :-D
Haha, yes, they match each other well that way. Normal people might, you know, talk, or something. *shrug* I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :-D
How cute was that? I love how in-character they both were!
That was incredibly sweet. I can't help smiling even when writing this comment. :D
Yay! Mission complete! I'm glad it was enjoyed :-)
Aww, that was cute. I love Sirius' attention to his motorbike, and the stealing of all of Remus' things was really sweet. Nice job!
Sirius is so special. When he steals, it's sweet XD I'm glad you enjoyed it!
hahaha, yes, BOYS. With their nonsensical games. <3
“I’m not your maid.”
“You can be,”
OH NO! SIrius is horrible! XD
i almost died! i was drinking tea but i laughed so hard its in my lap(... it burns) i love this fic its so sweet. ♥
Funny, funny, funny. How could Remus ever turn down the chance to be Sirius' maid? lol