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October 21st, 2009


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03:59 pm - Day 21 - Fic - Team Canon - Intermission
Team: Canon
Title: Intermission
Author: jtav
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Genre(s): Angst, Hurt/comfort
Word Count: 1750
Summary: The true story behind the joint Christmas gift.
Prompt: Orange: word (Healing)




Intermission


Poll #1474434 RS Games 2009
This poll is closed.

Was it truly AU or Canon Compliant? Please use the following: 2 for "yes", 1 for "sort-of", and 0 for "no"

How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)

How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)






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From:dear_tiger
Date:October 21st, 2009 08:39 pm (UTC)
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Oh, I wish they could have gove to Argentina! That sounded so great and heart-warming, just exactly how they might want to spend the rest of their lives. Too bad canon insist on being tragic. And I thought it was great how they both rejected the idea (maybe reluctantly) because they have duties to perform. It was very much in character, and I loved them both for it. Thank you for this :)
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:13 pm (UTC)
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Thank you. R/S are so duty bound it's tragic.
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From:ceredwensirius
Date:October 21st, 2009 09:07 pm (UTC)
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This felt very realistic and natural to me. I've always pictured Sirius running off to Central or South America so it was nice to see someone else thinks so too! This was lovely! Thank you for sharing.
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:16 pm (UTC)
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Thank you. I'm not sure where the Argentina bit came from, but a lot of people seemed to like it.

Edited at 2009-11-16 02:17 pm (UTC)
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From:iheartremus09
Date:October 21st, 2009 10:24 pm (UTC)
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I wish I knew how to do that italics quote thingie because this had some great lines. I loved the part about Remus not being able to deal with stains and fantacing about actually being married to Sirius.

This felt very sweet and real.
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:20 pm (UTC)
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Thanks.

For reference, < i >your text here< / i>. Remove the spaces.
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From:duck_or_rabbit
Date:October 21st, 2009 10:53 pm (UTC)
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Oh, this is really excellent. So many canon threads tied together: Arthur's attack, the number of times Harry faced Voldemort, Sirius fleeing Britain for S. America after PoA, the joint gift. Everything is wonderfully here.

The other thing you did nicely was to show how Sirius has been affected, but in his own words. That's nice dialogue. :)

Edited at 2009-10-21 10:54 pm (UTC)
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:25 pm (UTC)
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Thanks. I had fun tying together so many canon details, and I'm glad you enjoyed.
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From:quadrant_of_sky
Date:October 21st, 2009 11:55 pm (UTC)
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I enjoyed this - I loved your choice of title, how perfectly you kept to canon, and the overall fic itself. Thanks!
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:27 pm (UTC)
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Thank you. My beta came up with the title. All praise goes to her.
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From:secretsolitaire
Date:October 22nd, 2009 12:31 am (UTC)
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Aw, I enjoyed this -- fits nicely into canon.
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:27 pm (UTC)
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Thanks.
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From:bookgrrrl2006
Date:October 22nd, 2009 01:44 am (UTC)
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that was lovely and very, very sweet!
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:28 pm (UTC)
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Thank you.
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From:werewolfsfan
Date:October 22nd, 2009 02:43 am (UTC)
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Very canon, and very well imagined and carried out! Both men were very in character but dang, I liked the idea that they're really alive and living in Argentina!
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:29 pm (UTC)
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Thank you. I like the idea too.
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From:sra_danvers
Date:October 22nd, 2009 06:09 am (UTC)
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So good. The last phrase is so Remus, so tender and rigth...
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:30 pm (UTC)
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Thanks.
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From:magnetic_pole
Date:October 23rd, 2009 05:31 am (UTC)
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Ah, very nice! It's like holding up a prism, seeing something familiar from a different angle. M.
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:30 pm (UTC)
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That's what missing moments are for, yes?
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From:elessae
Date:October 23rd, 2009 05:30 pm (UTC)
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These post-Azkaban fics always get to me, to this tender, tender part of me for the puppies - and you've dealt so well with the themes of comfort and hurt and everything that is good-and-painful about that period in their lives - I really, really like this.
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:31 pm (UTC)
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Thank you.
From:batmanboxers
Date:November 12th, 2009 11:44 pm (UTC)
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This was gorgeous and stunning and amazing.
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From:jtav
Date:November 16th, 2009 02:32 pm (UTC)
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Thanks.

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