October 18th, 2009
|rsgamesmods||11:58 am - Day 18 – Fic: Team Canon: Conversations with a Turquoise Erumpent|
Title: Conversations with a Turquoise Erumpent
Word Count: 6000
Summary: Sirius, stuck in Remus’s room during Easter holidays, impersonates a magical beast.
Prompt: (Turquoise Poem)
Conversations with a Turquoise Erumpent
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Was it truly AU or Canon Compliant? Please use the following: 2 for "yes", 1 for "sort-of", and 0 for "no"
How well did the author/artist use their Prompt? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
How much did you like this story/art overall? 1 to 9 (1 being the least)
|Date:||October 18th, 2009 06:35 pm (UTC)|| |
This is wonderful. I really enjoyed reading it.
Well, this was interesting! A rather clever plot--certainly one I've never seen before. And I like the idea of Remus being raised by a musician dad. Very cute!
you have no idea how much i loved this. sirius was so boyish and resourceful with his toothpick and his food hoarding. i bet he could have taken on that frog!
the whole premise was great. it reminds me of a fic i once, it think by brighty18
, but there all the marauders but peter were shrunken. not that it was at all the same, i just like tiny people. lol.
poor sirius. he managed so well for himself despite being so tiny. and he managed emotionally, too. the hiding in the plane and asking questions was sheer genius as was the idea that electricity smells even better than mary jane.
you really managed to make this feel time period appropriate, too. that's quite an accomplishment and makes it very canon.
Impossibly cute!!! I loved how Remus knew from the beginning! :)
I am enchanted with Lilliputian Sirius and his spear! and Remus who sings out loud and dances when there is no one there to see!
This was a laugh out loud, feet kicking delight! I nearly died when a girl climbed a ladder and into Remus' arms while poor 3" Sirius thought of his own virginity! "Conversations with an Erumpent" would top the best seller lists for sure! Very original and a delight to me!
“Moony,” he said. “Don’t wake up now. Can’t you just absorb what I tell you in your sleep, or something?” Remus did not stir. Sirius leaned closer to his ear, trying not to touch his face. “Look, you are one of my best friends in the world, but I have to tell you, mate, something is wired backwards in your head.” He swallowed, bracing himself. “And I want to try this thing for you. It hasn’t exactly crossed my mind to… erm… think about you in the shower or anything, but I’m going to give that a try as well. So there we are. Don’t expect flowers. I would kiss you now, but you will probably snore and inhale me, you evil bastard.”
This was beautiful on so many levels. Creative and fun and awkward... and great!
I love Sirius' jealousy over Erica, and Remus knowing all along that it was him. And how Snape's plan to dispose of Sirius backfired. :D In a big way.
:) this was very fun to read.! i couldn't stop, and now i'm late!
This was lovely and funny, and clearly written by a person who knows their way with words. There's such a silly smile on my face right now, if you could only see :)
Besides, your Sirius is exactly how I imagine him to be - resourceful, smart, boyish and
a virgin dorky. Thank you for that.
*melts into a puddle* I loved this -- so funny and sweet and creative.
Oh the adventures a tiny person can have. Brilliant. I love Sirius climbing around in Remus' possessions and thus discovering a bit more about his friend. Remus was totally adorable, playing with the book mark. I love how he knew it was Sirius from the get go, really brought out their familiarity with one another and their friendship. I can totally see Remus being raised by a single dad.
I also like how Sirius views all this, that their attraction isn't normal but that he wants to give it a try anyway rather than running off to brood and deny.
Finally: teensy Sirius = squeee!
THIS MADE MY HEART SWELL WITH GLEE.