July 29th, 2008
|rsgamesmods||11:36 am - [Round Two] Fic: Team MWPP: Right there beside you|
Title: Right there beside you.
Team: Team MWPP
Warnings: Light bondage. Object insertion. Cross dressing. Role play.
Summary: You nurses are all sluts, aren't you?
Prompt: Scorpio (Oct. 24 -- Nov. 22) -- There is an understandable temptation to complain about an irritating factor in your life, but little will be gained by discussing it. You'll soon discover that your situation is less urgent than you think.
Genre(s): Fluff/Romance and Hurt/Comfort
Right There Beside You
Polling Now Closed!
Even now, I still have only one thing to say about this fic:
Hellooooooooooooooooooooo Nurse!!! :-D
*sits impatiently waiting for "next time"*
Thank you lovely!
And as for "next time"... I may have found a
nother white-robed character I like betterjust as much who is crying out to be molested seen to... *points to icon*
Edited at 2008-09-03 03:19 pm (UTC)
This was great! I love the thought of Sirius's 'Poor hurt love' voice XD It seems adorable.
Thank you so much! Sirius is only adorable to
people the person he's smitten with :D
ee! i love this! it was so hot and funny and sirius and remus are so sweet to each other. i love how you write their dynamic, in and outside of the sex, always taking care of each other (or at least trying) without making it sappy or excessively fluffy. :] and of course, sirius's wicked plan is pure genius. :p
Damn you woman for (i) being on the winning team AGAIN and (ii) busting my "anonymity" :D
But thank you for the comment!
Oh, yum. That was hot. Loved the thermometer -- Sirius is a clever one. ;-)
Nurse!Sirius is one of my favorite kinks. And he's a clever one, too - the thermometer is a great idea. But we don't expect anything less from Sirius.
Great job, Mystery Author. I'd certainly love to see more Nurse! or Healer!Sirius in action.
HAPPY SUPER BELATED BIRTHDAY FROM FOUR YEARS AGO, BELOVED!
I'm so glad you liked it :)
*squishes you thoroughly*
Perfect combination of sweet, funny and hot. Great job!
Brilliant use of the prompt! :)
YOU! *tackle-glomps and squishes*
Thank you :)
Lovely and fun! Nice work. :)
God! I love your Sirius to death. Only for Remus would he be so patient and caring and accomodating.
This was lovely and creative. Nurse!Sirius is too hot! and insecure Remus is adorable. Wonderful...
Oh, exactly. Everybody else gets the impatient, haughty stare of impending doom.
And thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
OMGawd! I'm almost speechless! This contest will never cease to flabbergast me! I can't believe that you went from a very well written, credible Remus worrying over his unique and pressing problems to the very kinky Nurse Black's ministrations and did it soooooooooo well. And it had funny moments as well! I may never be able to read about a full moon again and not think of this.
Thank you for your lovely comment! I'm so pleased you think that fic worked well on both levels :)
And thanks also for all of the commenting, reccing, promoting and linking you've been doing for the games! It is greatly appreciated.
Oh, lovely. Brilliant use of the prompt.
This is really wonderful... without being too sappy, but it was funny and just made me grin :D
Ah, I'm glad I got the balance right - thank you!
Haven't read yet, but you had me at You nurses are all sluts, aren't you?
Tch. Slow reader. Less gloating and more reading ;)
And congrats on the (second) win *cough*
|Date:||August 14th, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)|| |
hot hot hot hot hot. and hilarious, and as usual sirius is just too adorable. i love how this ties in with his future profession in your series, though i can't quite imagine his pulling this stunt at st mungo's!
as usual, i love it. still, however, waiting for that "getting back together" story...
Thanks for your comment, lovely!
still, however, waiting for that "getting back together" story...
Still on its way! Definitely on my list of (unposted) works-in-progress :)
|Date:||August 21st, 2008 09:18 am (UTC)|| |
...right. You just hit a series of buttons I didn't even know I had. This was hot, and funny (very much so, too), and good (because the dialogue isn't a lead-up to sex, it would have been a good story even if it had ended in a way that didn't involve it), and did I mention hot? I have had a whole parade of mental images that will keep me occupied for days - no, I don't just mean the kinky ones. And it was hot because it wasn't just a sex scene, so much as the two of them having sex - with their characters and their personalities. And I strongly hope that made sense, because right now I don't know how else to put it. ;P
You just hit a series of buttons I didn't even know I had.
AHAHA, thank you, but what else is fandom for, if not helping people uncover their inner perve? :D
Thank you SO MUCH for your lovely comment - I squeed out loud when I read it :)