July 29th, 2008
|rsgamesmods||11:36 am - [Round Two] Fic: Team MWPP: Right there beside you|
Title: Right there beside you.
Team: Team MWPP
Warnings: Light bondage. Object insertion. Cross dressing. Role play.
Summary: You nurses are all sluts, aren't you?
Prompt: Scorpio (Oct. 24 -- Nov. 22) -- There is an understandable temptation to complain about an irritating factor in your life, but little will be gained by discussing it. You'll soon discover that your situation is less urgent than you think.
Genre(s): Fluff/Romance and Hurt/Comfort
Right There Beside You
Polling Now Closed!
Even now, I still have only one thing to say about this fic:
Hellooooooooooooooooooooo Nurse!!! :-D
*sits impatiently waiting for "next time"*
Thank you lovely!
And as for "next time"... I may have found a
nother white-robed character I like betterjust as much who is crying out to be molested seen to... *points to icon*
Edited at 2008-09-03 03:19 pm (UTC)
This was great! I love the thought of Sirius's 'Poor hurt love' voice XD It seems adorable.
Thank you so much! Sirius is only adorable to
people the person he's smitten with :D
ee! i love this! it was so hot and funny and sirius and remus are so sweet to each other. i love how you write their dynamic, in and outside of the sex, always taking care of each other (or at least trying) without making it sappy or excessively fluffy. :] and of course, sirius's wicked plan is pure genius. :p
Damn you woman for (i) being on the winning team AGAIN and (ii) busting my "anonymity" :D
But thank you for the comment!
pfft, i would recognize your writing anywhere and i know i'm not the only one. ;D
It makes me absurdly pleased to hear that :)
Oh, yum. That was hot. Loved the thermometer -- Sirius is a clever one. ;-)
Nurse!Sirius is one of my favorite kinks. And he's a clever one, too - the thermometer is a great idea. But we don't expect anything less from Sirius.
Great job, Mystery Author. I'd certainly love to see more Nurse! or Healer!Sirius in action.
HAPPY SUPER BELATED BIRTHDAY FROM FOUR YEARS AGO, BELOVED!
I'm so glad you liked it :)
*squishes you thoroughly*
*squishes you, too*
I ♥ it.
Perfect combination of sweet, funny and hot. Great job!
Brilliant use of the prompt! :)
YOU! *tackle-glomps and squishes*
Thank you :)
|Date:||September 3rd, 2008 03:26 pm (UTC)|| |
*g* again, I'm so disappointed I couldn't find out it was you who wrote it! ;D
I was super extra sly this time ;)
|Date:||September 3rd, 2008 03:33 pm (UTC)|| |
*giggles madly* next time, make Remus wear a special outfit, too. ;D
(And now I re-read again, the way the dialogue is written is screaming out loud it was done by you... I'm so oblivious sometimes!)
Anything for you, lovely! Maybe some sort of superhero outfit :D
*squishes you thoroughly, all over again, just because you're so squishable*
|Date:||September 3rd, 2008 03:56 pm (UTC)|| |
*bursts out laughing* Oh yeah. This would suit him wonderfully, I think. The Nurse and the Superhero (that sounds like a porno film's title. XDD)
Am I now? just squish me as often as you want, then! :D
Lovely and fun! Nice work. :)
God! I love your Sirius to death. Only for Remus would he be so patient and caring and accomodating.
This was lovely and creative. Nurse!Sirius is too hot! and insecure Remus is adorable. Wonderful...
Oh, exactly. Everybody else gets the impatient, haughty stare of impending doom.
And thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
OMGawd! I'm almost speechless! This contest will never cease to flabbergast me! I can't believe that you went from a very well written, credible Remus worrying over his unique and pressing problems to the very kinky Nurse Black's ministrations and did it soooooooooo well. And it had funny moments as well! I may never be able to read about a full moon again and not think of this.
Thank you for your lovely comment! I'm so pleased you think that fic worked well on both levels :)
And thanks also for all of the commenting, reccing, promoting and linking you've been doing for the games! It is greatly appreciated.
Oh, lovely. Brilliant use of the prompt.
This is really wonderful... without being too sappy, but it was funny and just made me grin :D
Ah, I'm glad I got the balance right - thank you!
Haven't read yet, but you had me at You nurses are all sluts, aren't you?
Tch. Slow reader. Less gloating and more reading ;)
And congrats on the (second) win *cough*
Oh Lord in heaven do I suck some major balls. Let's see if I can fix this.
Sirius is curled up around him,
My heart completely clinched here, I love tender Sirius.
I don't know why Remus is so worried he tried to bite Sirius. Doesn't he get his instincts were so strong at that point even in his human form that his kinky side is coming out and he WANTS to bite Sirius. And oh how Sirius WANTS to be bitten.
"You get much better results if you rub it hard,"
Sirius is so wise, so sage. I bet he has loads of research to back this up!
Something small in your fic is niggling at me. Dumbledore having told Remus about the Order but to keep it quiet. I don't like DD as much as I used too. When I hear that I think of the part from DH where Aberforth says "secrets and lies, secrets and lies" I think DD kept secrets from the Marauders about one another and told them to keep secrets from each other. This little bit is something I find to be true that he would tell Remus not to tell that or any number of things and not realizing secrets can hurt and rip people apart.
Back to the porn----sorry
"I want to fuck you. But I can't."
LMAO!!! When I read that I rocked back in my chair. I love assertive Remus ready to take the bull by the horns.
Oh, who are you kidding? It's always been the other way around, and you've always spread him out as wide as he'll go.
I can not stop laughing about this. Remus is so kinky in this, I LOVE kinky Remus to me Remus is UBER kinky and this fits perfectly. Such a soft spoken bloke but really a dominating bastard *drools*.
But on someone as tall as Sirius, it might as well be a nurse's uniform from a porn film, because there is nothing decently modest about it.
Calling all fanartist draw this now! I can just picture this and WOW is that sexy! OH! Next time we chat take a look at my icon, the guys in the short white skirts. LOL it's perfect.
Sirius blushed!?!? Even slightly??? I love when Sirius blushes just the tiny little bit.
he can always outlast Sirius and that's all that really matters.
I think this is something we would call personal canon and I can say that because it's my personal canon too. Sirius is so wild such a fiery person I always think he's a sexual dynamo but also willing to have his own pleasure and Remus would be the sort to bring him off again and again because he's that sort. I think I had Remus coming only a couple time before Sirius but usually Sirius comes first.
he's far too much of a demanding, spoilt, lazy, bottom to bother with that.
Oh bottom Sirius! YES!!!! Have you ever read the Drarry where Draco is the rent boy and he talks about how you aren't really gay till you've bottomed?
Remus wants to hold his hand! *wibbles*
"It's more of a guideline, really," Sirius murmurs, starting to blush again.
I fell out of my chair laughing.
"You nurses are all sluts, aren't you?"
Again I love this line!
"Then stroke yourself," he says. "Rub yourself hard and come." Sirius reaches his free hand under the skirt at once, and Remus clears his throat. "Do it so I can watch," he clarifies.
Did you do Legilimancy on me before you wrote this fic, or am I not the only who thinks that is the hottest fucking thing? You had me laughing and totally *guh* the whole time, this part shoved me right into totally libido overload.
It was tender and sweet but also funny, which I LOVE funny but it was so damn hot, like REALLY damn hot. OMG that was so good.
Damn pregnancy I need a drink after that one!
|Date:||August 14th, 2008 10:50 pm (UTC)|| |
hot hot hot hot hot. and hilarious, and as usual sirius is just too adorable. i love how this ties in with his future profession in your series, though i can't quite imagine his pulling this stunt at st mungo's!
as usual, i love it. still, however, waiting for that "getting back together" story...
Thanks for your comment, lovely!
still, however, waiting for that "getting back together" story...
Still on its way! Definitely on my list of (unposted) works-in-progress :)
|Date:||August 21st, 2008 09:18 am (UTC)|| |
...right. You just hit a series of buttons I didn't even know I had. This was hot, and funny (very much so, too), and good (because the dialogue isn't a lead-up to sex, it would have been a good story even if it had ended in a way that didn't involve it), and did I mention hot? I have had a whole parade of mental images that will keep me occupied for days - no, I don't just mean the kinky ones. And it was hot because it wasn't just a sex scene, so much as the two of them having sex - with their characters and their personalities. And I strongly hope that made sense, because right now I don't know how else to put it. ;P
You just hit a series of buttons I didn't even know I had.
AHAHA, thank you, but what else is fandom for, if not helping people uncover their inner perve? :D
Thank you SO MUCH for your lovely comment - I squeed out loud when I read it :)
Aaaand apparently I have a nurse kink... I love it when fic teaches me something new and perverted about myself. And normally, cross-dressing squicks me out. Not on principle, mind you, but it's usually so awkwardly handled that I can't stand it. That was not awkward. That was hot. Bravo.
Aaaand apparently I have a nurse kink...
Happy to have been of service :D
That was not awkward. That was hot. Bravo.
Oh wow, that's a lovely comment! Thank you so much :)